Put their Soul in a Hole

We’re constantly telling stories about the things we buy. Your goal is to influence that story to make sure you have a starring role.

Why do you need to influence the story?

Aren’t they going to tell it anyway?

Of course. They’ll say things like, “my old phone was getting slow, so I got a new one.”

When you want them to say, “I kept missing moments because my camera took too long, but the SnapPhone 3000 takes a photo in one tap!”

And they’ll say, “data entry took ages so we got an automated system,” when you want them to say, “Our overtime bill was huge until we got the DataCapture X200!“

And they’ll say, “Our bloated accounting software cost too much so we switched.” When you want them to say, “We couldn’t get our new product off the ground until we freed up budget with CountPenny.”

Let your prospects tell their own story and you may be reduced to a nameless extra. You may not have a role in it at all.

But to get your starring role, you need to understand what shape the prospect’s story is going to take. Thankfully, that story is nearly always going to follow the same shape:

The Soul in a Hole.

Things were bad until you came along. And then they were better than ever.

What is the Soul in a Hole story?

The Soul in a Hole model is based on one first described by American writer Kurt Vonnegut. Vonnegut put together a framework of eight different story shapes, including Boy Meets Girl, Cinderella, and Which Way Is Up.

And one of those story shapes he called Man in Hole. Which I, in my arrogance, have redubbed Soul in a Hole for two reasons: it’s less sexist, and it rhymes.

A Soul in a Hole story itself is pretty straightforward:

  1. Something happens that makes things worse.
  2. The hero finds something that turns things around
  3. Things end up better than ever 

Hence the hole metaphor. Because falling into a hole definitely makes things worse. And getting out of a hole definitely makes you feel better. The character falls into a hole (things get worse), climbs out (things get better)that puts them in a metaphorical hole, out of which they proceed to climb. In fact, they often end up in a better place than they were at the beginning of the story.

This is exactly how you want customers and suppliers to feel about working with your brand.

It’s how you want your prospects to think they’ll feel about working with you.

And it’s how you want your boss to feel about hiring you.

That things were bad until you came along. And then they were better than ever.

Examples of the Soul in a Hole

Customer

“We updated our computers and all our printers stopped working (the hole). Then I found ACME Printers Ltd, who got them all working again; they even finally sorted that weird toner error we kept getting (better than ever!)”

Boss

“We’d won new business but didn’t have enough staff to service the existing customers. Some even grumbled about worse service (the hole.) So I hired Alison. Now we have enough staff and our clients are raving about us; they’re not going anywhere (better than ever!)”

About us

“We’d learned about the environmental impact of email, we tried to find a green, sustainable email marketing platform but couldn’t (the hole.) So we built it ourselves! Now our customers can send their emails knowing it’s all running on green electricity with negative carbon footprint (better than ever!)”

The hole is the important bit

People like to jump over the hole. And that’s a mistake.

This problem is particularly obvious when dealing with existing customers, bosses, suppliers, and so on. The Soul in a Hole story makes sense when winning that audience the first time around. But, once won, people think they should avoid problems at all costs. To tell stories where things just get better and better all the time.

And that’s a mistake. Because things don’t get better without problems to solve first.

Think about your last few appraisals with your boss. Did you walk in and say, “Things were just better this quarter?” Or did you say, “Things were better because I fixed problems”?

Your boss, your customers, your stakeholders all want you to make problems go away. So when you tell them how great you are, keep telling Soul in a Hole stories.

Archiving processes were time-consuming, so you worked to streamline them and now everyone’s saving time.

You noticed the lights weren’t energy efficient so you found some better replacements that cost less money to run.

You noticed the office feng shui was off so you rearranged your desk pens and now everyone’s energy is more harmonious.

The trick is to keep telling Soul in a Hole stories, stringing them together so that each one ends in an even better place than before. The overall trend is upwards, but you’re able to demonstrate your value each time.

How to influence Soul in a Hole stories

The prospect needs to understand the hole they’re in. Otherwise, they can’t appreciate how much you helped them out of it. 

So make sure you’re defining the real problem for them. It’s not that your phone was slow; it’s that you were missing moments. It’s not that data capture was taking too long; it’s that you had to pay overtime to hit SLAs. It’s not that the accounting software was too expensive; it’s that you wanted room in the budget to launch your next project.

Is solving the problem your USP? Excellent. Make that clear. Make it clear that no-one else’s camera takes photos as fast as yours. No-one else’s data capture is faster. No-one else’s software is cheaper.

But, odds are, that won’t be the case. So, if you can’t claim that no-one else does what you do, make it clear that no-one else understands the problem like you do. Because then they know your focus is where they want it to be.

Lots of people can claim “faster,” and it can mean many things. “Takes photos in one tap” is what your prospect is looking for.

How many people offer “automated data capture?” But it’s your focus on “minimal human involvement” that will keep your prospect’s overtime bill down.

Let’s be honest, “cheaper” can sound like “cheap.” What you’re doing is “trimming our fat to keep your invoice lean.”

Can you put them in a hole?

Sometimes your audience won’t feel like they’re in a hole. Or sometimes you won’t be sure how to tell them how you got them out. That’s okay. Some stories are easier to tell than others. If you’re struggling, remember to boil it all down to the simplest Soul in a Hole you can:

  1. Things get worse
  2. You help turn things around
  3. Things end up better than ever

And if you’re still struggling with it, don’t fret: get in touch and I’ll help you get your Soul in a Hole stories righter!

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